My Enemy-My friend

by Jenni Marie   Oct 30, 2006


You've been my foe and my friend
For so many years
You have helped me deal
With all of my fears.

You've made me happy
You've made me sad
You've made me feel good
and made me feel bad.

You've made me smile
You've made me cry
You've made me feel
Like I want to die.

You've made me feel so alive
You've made me feel almost dead
Made me live so many hours
Inside of my head.

Made me lose friends
Made people think I am weird
because what I did
They always feared.

Made me able to hope
Made me able to cope.
Made me waste so many tears
Made me hide from all my fears.

But now it's time for us to part
It's time for a brand new start
I can't always have you in my life
On my own I need to face strife.

You're no good for me
This I now see
With you in my life
I'll never be free.

You've made me feel so good
Each time I spilled my blood
But now I've found I'm feeling strong
And now for me, Self Harm is wrong.

After so many years. cuts and so much blood
This is finally the end
And I'd like to say
Goodbye my worst enemy and my best friend.

**I wasn't sure if this should go in sad, or life or friendship, so I placed it here.**

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  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I think this should be in friendship .
    Some rhymes just seemed too simple .
    And others seemed kind of forced in a way .
    The last stanza, try editing it a little .
    But overall, it was good .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Hmm, I think it should go in friendship. Nice job on this, it was quite emotional. I found that the rhymes you used were a little simple though and that the poem could be improved with more detail. Keep up the godo work though 5/5

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