Tainted

by sweetiepie18   Oct 31, 2006


Tainted on the outside,
tainted from within,
tainted from the moment, I ever let you in

Tainted by my actions,
Tainted by my sin,
Tainted on the outside,
Tainted from within,

tainted on the outside,
tainted from within,
tainted from the moment, I ever let you in

i know its short but i may add to it at a later date.

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  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    It is short but it's nicely written...
    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Yes, you really should add, cause you have an amazing start,
    but from what you have, its great
    5/5
    ~MF~

  • 17 years ago

    by Lenny

    I like it! I love the structure of the first stanza and the repitition was excellent. Maybe add a little more to the second stanza...and yet dont.

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