And if you go, I want to go with you

by Elynnka   Oct 31, 2006


The sky is pouring cold raindrops -
Like a flow of tears that never stops,
Ravens and wind singing a strange duet
In praise of this moment we can never forget.

The trees are shedding their rusty leaves
And it seems as if all nature grieves
For what's about to come of you and me
If we stop fighting for our integrity.

We stare at each other without saying a thing
It seems words are worthless as we're waiting
For your train to come and take you away
From what seems to be our last day...

We hear a whistle from afar and see smoke,
This is the end - I am about to choke,
Struggling with myself to not let emotion flow,
But I can't help it; I don't want you to go

And as you take your bags I start to cry
My lips won't move - don't want to say goodbye,
So I grab your arm and ask you to stay
We can make things work out some way...

You don't know what to do, how to respond
For you feel too the strength of our bond,
So you hold my hand and look me in the eyes
Telling me that leaving would result in your demise

So I smile in bliss and show you my ticket
All crumpled up as I kept playing with it,
Because wherever you may go I want to go with you
For I love thee so much and I see you do too.

**NOTE: Done for a contest. I got first place ^^ I'm so happy! Hope you like it!**

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  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    Girl, theres a REASON it was first place! it was adorable!! i loved the story to it...i love story poems. oh, and to let you know, you were really close in the contest i judged, just some things attracted me to the other poems a bit more. but your poem had extremely good imagery, so good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Congrats! great job in this one!

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    How beautiful! Congrats on winning first place and thanks for commenting on my poem! *10/5* if I could!
    Ciao...*