What Is To Be Believed

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Nov 1, 2006


This is very short... But, I felt in adding more, it completely ruined it. Thus, it was left like so.
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A broken love,
As you could have guessed,
Still never dies,
But is ever blessed.
Try too hard,
And you\'ll never receive,
What lies beneath,
What is to be believed.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    Short and simple, but beautiful. I liked this poem also. You have a wonderful talent. The flow of this poem was lovely, the picture that you painted was beautiful also. I really enjoy reading your work. 5/5

    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Ahhhh....the subtle truth............

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is awesome just the way it is
    the rhythm of the rhyme is perfect
    The content is so profound that I could ponder the meaning forever

    My initial inerpretation is, as the master says, we cannot direct the course of love
    great job

  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Very short but really good. and ur right if u put in more, it will ruin it. for me it's sort of confusing but it's really quite interesting! i like it! keep it up! 5/5 for me!

  • 17 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Absulotly amazing, you manage to capture so much emotion, in such a short poem. Very well written, and very smooth!

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