The edge of the sword

by Corruption   Nov 3, 2006


The blade shining bright
with thousands of gem reflecting the light
stuck in my heart so tight
unreachable even with all your might
i wish i had my own right
so i could love one night

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  • 17 years ago

    by simply crissyboo

    Awww. that's soo sad. but it's pretty good. short and sweet. i like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Wow! Keenan.. short poem but holds soo much power [well to me it does!] Im Just like WOW!
    I was wondering why u haven't written a poem in a while..and i was worried it mightn't be as good but i was proven wrong! [Yay!]
    great work hun, luv it as always!
    Keep It UP UP UP!

    Keep SMiling
    `*-Tormented

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalgalath

    This got the point across in just a few short lines. nice work.

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