How I feel

by Anonymous Angel   Nov 3, 2006


Dark clouds in the sky,
are drifting by,
Rain is starting to come

this is just like I feel,
dark clouds are surrounding my heart,
from the beginning to the start.

the rain is just like the tears on my face,
I'm crying but why?
thinking, is it so hard to understand,
that I'm not just an random girl.

no friend, no one's helping me,
am i that horrible to see?

*I made it in the bus to france. I went there with school,, It was great:)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked it, and i agree with the other comments, it deserves a 5 because of the way you wrote it, i mean, it captures you, and thats good
    well done
    xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    Why do people give great poems anything but a 5. This is a beautifully written poem, it really does catch what you were feeling at the time. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by tinna

    How can anyone give u a rating less than 5!!! it really describes how ur feeling, and that is tallent..

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