No more

by firexflys   Nov 4, 2006


NO MORE

Sitting here thinking where the old you went
Lost in all the amazing time we spent
I keep saying its just a phase
I keep telling my self it will be over in days

But nothing seems to change
I'm not liking you acting so strange
I miss the person you use to be
And I'm sure reading this you would disagree

But...

No more I love you out of the blue
No more baby this is how much I miss you
No more kisses for no reason
No more flowers with the change of the season
No more messages just because youre thinking of me
No more poems for only me to see

What happened to the time that passed?
Everything has changed so fast
Have I really missed that much
You couldnt have lost your touch

Been sitting here trying to take my time
But baby I'm really wanting you to be mine
Missing the way things were
Right now everything seem to be a blur

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulCutter

    This hits home...and it's so sad to think that the love of our lives could be slowly drifting away from us right in front of our eyes. Thank you so much for writing this...it's something that I can totally relate to.

  • 17 years ago

    by reality

    That really touched me i loved it i went through somethin like that

  • 17 years ago

    by reality

    Wow that poem really touched me cause after me and my baby split up things like that started to happen but we fixed it

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl this was really heartfelt there was a lot of emotion. dnt worry things will work out. very well written though. keep it up xx

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    This is so sad :[ very nicely written the flow and rhythm were great.. Just a couple of slight errors.. Hope ya don't mind me pointing them out.
    The first line after but.. The 'if' should be 'of' I think..?
    The second line in the last stanza.. Should be 'I' instead of I'm..

    beautifully written and full of emotion.. well done 5/5 xx

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