My Turn

by Ike Dizzle   Nov 4, 2006


My turn

Sitting here crying
As I watch you lie there
Lifeless
And you killer don t care

Taking kind people out of here
Everyday
And leaving you body there
With nothing else to say

But he made a mistake
When he killed my father
Thinking none
It would ever bother

But it bothers me everyday
As I see your picture by my bed
It s so hard to handle
That you are dead

It drives me nuts
Not having you by my side
Not having you here
To wipe the tears from my eye

But I guess it s my turn
To finally have some fun
I will get you diabetes
For the trouble you have done

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I think you said 'you' a lot of times when you meant to say 'your', but maybe I'm wrong. It was an okay piece. I didn't like the one-word lines in stanzas one and two, as I felt they broke the flow. That's all I think.

    Brad

    P.S. Thanks for your comment on my pieces.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Very good poem,
    You made your emotions very clear, that's good.
    I'm sorry if this is based on a true story.
    But you put the words very good on paper.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    :-(.. It must be true to read this but very emotional to read every step of line which is possible it's real feelings.
    You did very good on it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tia

    0MGG!! G00D J0B!! 5/5!!
    LMA0 >>>DiAB3T3S <<<

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Great work! 5/5

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