Thanks For the Lies

by BeautifulxMess   Nov 6, 2006


Does it matter to you that I cry;
Do you care I'm even around?
I'll fall forever from the sky;
I'll just fall flat to the ground.

Broken cries become of me;
My life will just disappear.
Who is it I'm suppose to be;
Why do I always give a tear?

My friend, what is your name;
Why do you treat me like this?
No matter what it's all the same;
My veins beat through my fist.

Sorry my money isn't enough;
Sorry my clothes aren't a lot.
I can't be an angel from above;
I can't be all that and "hot".

What are friends for anyway;
They always seem to be broken.
Someone will cry every day;
Then they'll be done and forgotten.

What's going on with friends;
Can't there be some peace at all?
Why do they always have to end;
It always seems to start with a call.

You lock me inside myself;
You say you understand.
I can't trust anyone else;
Thanks for the lies...Friend..

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  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Wow. Lots of anger again lol. I liked the way you expressed your anger though. It wasn't through profanity, and you used great imagery. When I'm angry, I usually use a lot of profanity. I think I only actually posted like 2 poems that involved swearing in them to this site. xD

    Anyways, the flow was stable, the imagery was used well. I didn't see any need for fixes. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    This was a very nice poem..i liked the first stanza the best
    "Does it matter to you that I cry;
    Do you care I'm even around?
    I'll fall forever from the sky;
    I'll just fall flat to the ground."...it popped out at me. I thought the stanza with the word hot in it was a bit forced and could be done better. well thats all that i have to say..very well done.

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