Forever Gone

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Nov 9, 2006



There is a river near
Rushing waters pass through
Murky colored
I think I`ll take a walk down there
With a gun in my pocket
And mascara ruined eyes
I`ll go walk near the rushing water
And play the game of life or death
Let`s see how long it takes me til
I slip and fall or
I can`t take it anymore and press the trigger
You wanted me to disappear
You wanted me to be gone
So it be
If you don`t care
I guess no one does
It takes me a few hours
To get my courage up
As I take the gun to my head
I press a prayer through my lips
I loved you,
And you knew it,
But telling me to disappear,
Is harder to do,
I just want to run back and say sorry,
But you won`t let it be,
You shut me out,
So as I am about to disappear
I just wanted you to know,
I love you`
I press the trigger
And I`m forever gone

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  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    I can`t take it anymore and PULL the trigger
    So BE IT
    I PULL the trigger

    Ohter than that its a good poem!

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow...I really liked this.
    I enjoyed the use of imagery and the wording.
    I found this to be sad and powerful, a wonderful write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tarek

    Hey, thats really good.if u like read my poem and give a comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Creative setting. Nice topic. The only thing you can improve on is adding more metaphors instead of fill words and your transition. Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem is so sad and filled with so much emotion. You did an amazing job on this. The descriptions that you used were wonderful and could really be pictured well. The emotions that you portrayed could be felt throughout the poem also. You did an amazing job on this! I hope that you don't really feel this way anymore and that everything is ok :) Once again, great job on this. 5/5

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