Ignite Me!

by Natalie   Nov 10, 2006


Parched hands reach into paper-thin air,
Tarnished tears beg once more in despair,
Trembling lips whisper words locked inside,
Choking scandalous fears swallow pride.

Cold floors sends chills up anemic spines,
Feelings about love and hate cross lines,
Bright lights dim until room's beyond dark,
Lighting match sticks that wish to not spark.

(Ignite me)..................With hope and faith!

10th November 2006
Copyright (C) Natalie

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXDurrTYSOutHXx

    Nice Poem. I Liked It A Lot. The Way You Used The Wordz To Flow Like That, Amaze'in. Keep It Up!5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Eh. that should have been 'your' not 'you're'.

    eesh! stupid attack. lol

    slakdjlkdjs

  • 17 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Fudge, Natalie!
    you're writing is like.. wowwwwww.
    for serious, now.
    you're improving so much. i'm envious.

    i actually think i'm getting WORSE. ha!

    i love youuu!

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Very descriptive poem. I loved your word usage. The rhyming and flow was excellent.

    Cold floors sends chills up anemic spines,
    Feelings about love and hate cross lines,
    ^^ Excellent lines!

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