Behind The Tears

by Daisy if you do   Nov 14, 2006


Although clear in color they may seem,
Truths untold hidden in scheme,
Much they know although unseen,

Crawling at first the skin embraced,
Following faster quickening the pace,
Never their path again to retrace,

Silently creeping to the foreground,
Exposing themselves while earthbound,
Behind these tears that never make a sound

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  • 18 years ago

    by robin milford

    Excellent poem short and to thepoint

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    You have done an excellent job with this. Although short, it gets the point actoss in such a unique fashion. Definetly a 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh wow nice rhyming and words were great keep it up
    it was a sad poem too it made it flow nicely

  • 18 years ago

    by Leanne

    I loved the style of this poem, and the meaning behind it was fantastic, you gave discription so well, this is my favourite of yours that i've read up to now.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    It was orginal in concept, and I loved the imagery and wording.

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