Abortion

Def got my 5 vote short but gr8 u def get the point across keep writing an take care hun sarah x

Touching poem. it is slighty confusing though. at first ithohought it was against. but at the end it wasn't. but in this case it works beacuse abortion /is/ a confusing thing. very nicey written though. emotions were clear and the flwo was very well. its a shame it was V voted x3Lauren

I don't know who would downvote this. This was amazing. I don't really know what to say...lol. Excellent write! 5/5

-Poetess

I believe the best poems are the most controversial. If it tends to step on toes or cross the lines of acceptance, then the reader is usually offended because the poet has captured feelings that may be hidden. This was an awesome write. I however cannot critique your poetry. That would be like a kindergartner grading college papers.

I'm sorry but you might wanna be carful with writing poems like this...and I didn't like what the poem was about AT ALL and I mostly didn't like the "it's all for the best" but you did do an awesome job writing it.
Burning~Wings