My dear love

by Brittany C   Nov 16, 2006


My dear love,
My sweet love,
You are my only,
You are my soul,
My one love,

Oh how I wish,
That you were here,
To hold my hand,
And to whisper sweet things,
All I wont in this world is your love,
And you to be there for me when the times are ruff,

How I wish,
That it could be,
Only you and me,
In front of this fire of love,
On this cold winter night,
How sweet that truly would be,

I love you with all my heart,
And you love me in return,
So hold me close,
All through the night,
And never let go,
Till the end of time.

    report violation
1


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I agree with mindy some of seemed that you repreated things over and over again. but that is alright, again use synonyms and read the punction you use. other that that this was pretty good, but its just not my thing sorry dear 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    All I wont in this world is your love,
    And you to be there for me when the times are ruff,
    `All I want
    ruff = rought

    Okay, so some of the repitition worked . Some of it didn`t . I wish you would use metaphors or something sometimes when expressing feelings in these poems ): It kind of feels like you`re repeating the same things over & over again .
    But overall, nicely written .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Clarissa

    Aww i understand COMPLETELY where you are coming from (:

  • 17 years ago

    by Clarissa

    Aww i understand COMPLETELY where you are coming from (:

  • 17 years ago

    by The Reaper

    This poem is very nice good work

Read All Comments (14)

More Poems By Brittany C

People Who Liked This Also Liked