Fall To Pieces(Nerualette)

She falls to pieces whenever he is near
The object of all her affection
The one she wishes to erase
That night of lies, and deception
She falls to pieces whenever he is near

You're the one she cannot bare to face
Telling her your love was true
You convinced her you were sincere
To think, she never doubted you
You're the one she cannot bare to face

She falls to pieces whenever he is near
Streaming fast are stone cold tears
Falling effortlessly down her faded eyes
Broken, because of his, your disguise
Eyes in which arsenic is laced
You're the one she cannot bare to face

All she ever feels is dejection
Why can't you seem to realize
She falls to pieces whenever /you/ are near
/You're/ the one she cannot bare to face
To think, she believed the lie
'I promise I'll never hurt you'

/word/ means its italisiced
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my own made up poetry form.. and i know its not done. just comment on it how it is right now ok?

Nerualette-
a poem consisting of 4 stanzas,
5 lines for the first 2 stanzas, and 6 for the 3rd & forth.
the rhyme scheme is AbcbA CdadC AaeecC beACed

Words-
lines A's and C's have 8, all lower case lower case have 6

Capital A's and C's are refrains.

** yes i know, in the last stanza i changed the refrain slightly but its my form so I DONT CARE. =]