Price of war...

by Welshy   Nov 19, 2006


Window closed,
curtains drawn,
emotion lost,
feelings worn,
silent moans,
weeping soft,
tears rolling,
greiving loss.

Stole away,
death had come,
crack of sound,
smoking gun,
bullet soars,
pierce skin,
blood splatter,
bullet in.

In my arms,
lying still,
blood flowing,
lungs fill,
eyes closing,
tears roll,
friend dieing,
empty soul.

War passing,
claiming souls,
taking lives,
achieving goals,
creating pain,
causing tears,
scaring soldiers,
making fear.

Window closed,
curtains drawn,
emotion lost,
feelings worn,
silent moans,
weeping soft,
tears rolling,
greiving loss.

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  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "silent moans,
    weeping soft,
    tears rolling,
    greiving loss."

    This is one of those topics that isnt always the easiest to write about, but you pulled it off excellently. Its sad that the oppurtunity is even there to write about these kind of things. But your words ring true and hopefully everyone else can see that too.

    Take Care.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marcus

    Your work is great!! This is very unique

  • 17 years ago

    by Pamela

    This poem is so good. I wish I could write like that. You're crazy good at writing.

    Pamela :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Steven

    Wow, such a good poem and sad, keep up the good work!
    -steven

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