by LadyWaszky Nov 20, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Every argument, Every lie |
by David
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I like how in your para you used awake and asleep, shows how well you can write. this was an enjoyable poem to read. bravo. clap clap. |
by amoxi
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Theres some conflict in this one but it was well written i liked it |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
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Brilliant. |
by Jenni Marie
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I think the wording you used in this was beautiful. |
by Tara Kay
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Well, i did like this one. it was long and didn't keep me interested enough but i loved the lines |