Advice to my Son

by John (Mr. Whuppy)   Nov 20, 2006


Wake up to it And when you are alive
I will join you in your quest for enjoyment
the important thing is for you to arrive
At the point of fulfilling employment

I know you are still in your teens
And you don't know what life has in store
But someday you'll find what it means
What the meaning of life is for

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  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I think it's very simple and yet has a lot of meaning to it. I also like that the title becomes apart of the poem by explaining what it means. Great job and keep it up! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Thats cool. i liked the poem. short and to the point. please check out mine if you dont mind.

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    Simple and to the point. Good advice to give to your son. Keep up the great job John! 5/5

    Love
    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    Have Eddited thanks Donna

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Very nicely written Sir.. it's added some extra's though, needs going through and deleting them, other than that.. Very nicely written.. The flow is excellent 5/5 xx

    I'm not a teen and still searching for the meaning of life lol

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