Please Remember Me

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Nov 23, 2006


[[This was hard for me to write because it\'s true, and I had to stop writing because I was crying so bad.]]

Mommy,
Whats happening to me?
Why is there I.V's sticking in me,
Why are their tubes hooked to me.
Why are you crying mommy?
Am I going to die?
I dont want to die,
I want to see daddy come back from war,
I want sit and watch a rainbow again.
Sing me a song mommy,
Sing me twinkle, twinkle little star.
Mommy,
Wheres sissy?
Wheres my brothers?
Why can't I go outside and play with them.
Why does my chest hurt,
Why is there these black strings in and out of me?
Mommy,
Why are you crying?
Is there a booboo I can kiss away
Like you do to me?
Why are these walls so bare?
I want to go home.
I dont want to be here.
I'm scared mommy.
Take me home.
Mommy,
Why are you fading in and out,
What are the doctors doing to me?
"Baby boy,
You wont be seeing your daddy,
Your leaving this cruel world.
It's so hard for me and sissy and your brothers to let you go,
But the doctor says your not getting any better.
We have to put you off life support so you dont suffer anymore.
I\'m sorry baby, I love you forever and always.",
Mommy says.
Mommy,
I'm dying, I dont want to,
I told you mommy.
Please dont let me die.
I want to see daddy come home.
"Honey,
Daddy died today,
He was coming home.
But he went to a place called Heaven,
Thats where your going to.
Meet daddy there and tell him we love him."
Okay mommy,
I will.

As I tightened onto my teddy bear,
Mommy gripped on my hand.
I faded into black.
I went on a journey,
And I found Daddy at a place called Heaven.
As I look down to my old home
I saw a funeral it had a picture of me and daddy
With mommy, sissy and my brothers standing there
Me and daddy are laying there
I call daddy over
And yell there we are
We're only dreaming
He gently whispers,
"I'm sorry son,
I was killed on my plane coming home,
Mommy prayed to me telling me what happened.
You were ran over by a truck,
The driver was drunk and driving."
I'm only five, I say.
I still have alot of time ahead of me,
I dont understand.
I'm only five and I'm already dead.
As I walk away,
I gently whisper,
"Please remember me."

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  • 15 years ago

    by A F

    Very nice. Gave me goosebumps.
    Who's the kid here?

    xxx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Omg this is sad. im sorry this happened to you. i hope you feel better and your life is going good. great poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelso

    This poem made me cry. it was so sad. i loved it 5/5.
    ♥Kelsey♥

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    This was heartbreaking. You have a real talent. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wow,that poem put me into tears(actaully i'm still crying)so if i have spelling mistakes you know why(cause i can't see anything at the momment) omg where to being...you are and excellent poet,you get a 5/5 for this no questions asked...it should be higher then a five but they onl;y let you go up to five on here:(...thank you so much for your comment on my poem and now you are on my favorits list,so i'll start reading more of your work:)...until then...goodbye
    auna