A Teenage Life

by Mezmeryz   Nov 25, 2006


What can I do when it all seems a riddle?
With the controls of my life people just seem to fiddle
I can't seem to think straight, I don't seem to see
Where my life is leading, what I really need

My heart's confused, my brains in a muddle
When I sit down and think I cry a puddle
That restless feeling where nothing's understood
Even with people I love, there's no good mood

Problems just seem to mount up high
And when it comes to sorting, I won't even try
Trying to understand is what I never did
My brains brewing up and I can't find the lid

Trouble with my best friends that I just can't hack
Next moment they've gone and stabbed me in the back
My stomach's doing flips and I feel so sick
People using and abusing, like its some new trick

Smoking and blazing, like its some new hype
Wanting to die when my life's just ripe
Making out I'm bad when I haven't got jack
Thinking I'm cool when sniffing that crack

Holding back my worries like I couldn't care less
Chilling with my mates that I forever bless
Believing that with us there is no strife
Because I'm living what we call, The Teenage Life

*i wrote this just for the fun of it...well i was feeling something when i wrote it..all the stuff i explained near the beginning but still, i feel i enjoyed writing this because it made me forget why i was writing it at all for a moment. a teenage life..got its teenage problems :l

*please rate or comment on the poem, it will be greatly appreciated and i will comment and rate back all round. Thank- you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    I like this poem, I love how you feel and how it relates to not only you but links with how many teenagers feel aswell. I am a teenager to and I know how you feel, but for me, it's about not knowing things that make life so good, and about how much people hurt you and they think its funny, now i think well i never saw that coming, but I take it all as an expierence and an opitunirty to learn, but rest asure, with all the things you dont no now, they will automatically come to mind later on in life with out even trying. I love the fact that you have writen it to try and help and express how teenagers feel aswell.
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    What can I do when it all seems a riddle?
    With the controls of my life people just seem to fiddle
    I can't seem to think straight, I don't seem to see
    Where my life is leading, what I really need

    You managed to adhere to a rhyming scheme except " what I really need" you could make it rhyming by something like" what would I really be" Your poem is well written and its very explanatory. Great 5/5 of course

  • 16 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Very well-written. Nicely explains the generation.

    [tragic]

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    You really reflected the things as exploring so well
    My fave lines should be;

    Holding back my worries like I couldn't care less
    Chilling with my mates that I forever bless

    Well done hun,
    Sincerely,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    To be honest this one is good n I give u 4/5. Its a nice description of teenage life.

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