The Future of a god

Elogantly put, but not showed off. You did an excellent job, and vocab was perfect, anything less wouldn't have done justice to the poem. the words were vivid and inspiring, I don't understand why your rating is so low, this was excellent. truly a 5/5

I think it was brave putting a word in your poem without knowing what it means lol you did a good job I don't know what it means either but the sound of it seems to fit correctly so good job!

Wow this is a really popular poem isnt it? i can see why....it is creative..and a wide use of vocab..=) 5/5

Really good imaginery and creativity
And write a hopeful love poem,ok?
I wanna feel love like i feel sadness in you
I'll be waiting for your love poem(i said those cos your imaginery and wording can make a wonderful love poem)i believe in this
Take care of yourself
Just try it and don't take my request too serious,you don't have to,but i mean it could be good
See ya
LAURA

This poem really REALLY moved me. It was soo sad! Again, your word choice is spectacular! Where do you get your ideas and inspiration?? Because I wish I could write like you... really. I love it. :)