Terra

by Mommy And Me   Nov 29, 2006


[T] aunting tears trace thoughts

[E] nough has been said with screams

[R] evealing myself, i barely ever do

[R] eady to take the fall, what did i do so wrong?

[A] nd these are the kisses of my days

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  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    This wasnt too bad. the first two lines went well, but the second two ended in the same word for the rhyme... it would have worked out better if they were different. and i felt that the last line didnt really go...i was left kind of thinking Huh? but keep working at it, with some minor adjustments it could be a great acrostic!

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