by Void Nov 30, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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Thursday came and went again, |
by Midnight Sun
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Ok you're a officially in my favorites. So amazing, ...Me...! I can't wait to read more! lol....really, you are really good. Keep it up! |
by *Charisma*
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Lol #4 comments. |
by *Charisma*
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It was an unusual poem but I liked the ending despite that it was sad. My one suggestion is to work on the flow of the last line in your 2nd stanza. It doesn't read well. But other than that, good job! |