A message in a bottle

by Karl Wild GG23   Dec 4, 2006


I stand beside the ocean,
So blue and forever wide,
With a message in a bottle,
That I send away with the tide.

I hope it finds someone,
I don't care how long it takes,
The bottles journey has just begun,
And I watch every move it makes.

As it floats out into the sunset,
On the deep blue sea,
In my mind I see a silhouette,
And I know it's you and me.

The bottle will find me love,
No matter how long and far,
Something I've been deprived of,
Because I don't know where you are.

Before you know it you and I,
Will be walking hand in hand,
Underneath the moonlit sky,
On the soggy snow white sand.

My little message in a bottle,
Has finally found me love,
My heart races at full throttle,
You're now the only one I think of.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    One of your better ones
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    This is so sweet and very creative its like a story while i read it i just saw the things happening like a movie great job

    laura

  • 17 years ago

    by tyanna

    I have been impressed by all of your poems so far..You have so much talent for writting.. This poem showed a lot of emotion and was very well worded... Great job...5/5
    Tyanna

  • 17 years ago

    by J4Y

    Theres is a rele sweet poem i lyk it alot its different to any love poem good job sweetie xxxxxxxxxx