Dear Suzanne,
I like your poem...but change the way you think about yourself. I come from the same place you are in but have learnt a lesson in my life. Never to regret. Live your life today like you've never lived before. Victory is yours and your day will come. Be brave and face your destiny. "Even a lump of carbon goes through heat and pressure to turn into a diamond"
..And that's wht u are.
All the best.
Adios,
Neo.

Great write! You are still young enough so spread your wings and fly as high and far as you want!

This is a really good poem. I liked the flow of it. You should join contests on poetryamerica.com

Dont mean to lecture but u should've thought about this BEFORE! =] i lub u tho so its ok lol...

Hey, Awsome poem! I can relate to this poem very much! Trry capitalising all you I's at the start of each line!
Love Mel

I love you're poems they are great. thanks for that comment and the advice you left in it.. well the parent thing! it means a lot! well keep on writing, you rock!

Good job and thanks for posting a comment on my work im 12 adn i think i suck but my freinds think im good and i have bad luck with dudes too.

Awesome job Hun :)

Hey i really like this, kinda reminds me bout my dad? well anyway yea u're a good writer. could u comment on my poem 'don't make my mistakes'? iot is a true story and it is really important to me i would love it if u oculkd comment. u r a gr8 writer keep it up kk cya

Thank you for the comment and I really like this poem..especially the last line.

I used to relate to this poem all the time but luckily my boyfriend has pulled me out of it and loves me the way I am lols But this was written really well and the emotions in it were good =) Keep writing ^_^
~*Rhea*~

Omg i love this one so much hun its just so my life god you can write hun