Not Even A Simple Smile

by shela   Dec 6, 2006


I try to get your attention
Just every single day
But you don't seem to notice me
It doesn't matter anyway
'Cuz all you seem to be thinking of
Is everything but me
How I wish you'd open your eyes
How I wish it's me you'd see
I could make you so very happy
If you just gave me a chance
I'd make you forget all about her
I'd wake you up from that trance
I hate to see you holding her
I wish it's me you'd touch
I wish you'd hold me in your arms
And say that you love me so much
But I guess it'll never happen
All my attempts proved futile
I'll never get your attention
Not even a simple smile.

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  • 13 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    How I wish you'd open your eyes
    How I wish it's me you'd see

    I felt that that wasn`t exactly the best choice to repeat the 'How I wish' but other than that, it`s a well written poem . Many can relate, and it held meaning .
    Well done(:
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 13 years ago

    by LuvLyLynn

    I like this poem a lot... you are really good, keep up the good work...