Is forever just a word?

by Karl Wild GG23   Dec 6, 2006


Is forever just a word?
Because I think it is,
To me that words absurd,
What's hers is never his.

Sure one day you'll fall in love,
But will it last forever?
Or will you lose your precious dove,
A love you thought so clever.

Fooled by seven letters,
If not "love you" then "forever",
I'd believe in forever better,
If it actually meant never.

Because forever never seems,
To end up how we planned,
Ruins our hopes and dreams,
Something I could never understand.

How a word thats so profound,
Can fail us so many times,
Although it never makes a sound,
You'll hear the pain it chimes.

So I don't believe in forever,
Because it's just a word,
Relationships always seem to sever,
Just in case you haven't heard.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Sara

    So I don't believe in forever,
    Because it's just a word

    i think this has changed now hasnt it baby :P... but nonetheless i loved it because i didnt believe in forever either until now :P... 5/5 great job

    i lovee you <3

  • 13 years ago

    by minh

    Awe... i liked this poem. I hope it is forever though. Great work 5\5

  • 13 years ago

    by Used n Confussed

    An amazing poem!
    I really like this!
    xxxx

  • 14 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Good poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Fooled by seven letters,
    If not "love you" then "forever",
    I'd believe in forever better,
    If it actually meant never.

    That is a perfect stanza. Great poem. Enough said. =]