That Fateful Night

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Dec 7, 2006


They say one night can change you life
And I know that's true for me.
What happened on that December's night?
You'll just have to wait and see.

I met a boy in the spring of `o6,
and I swore he was the one,
The emotions that we shared together,
were more radiant than the sun

Inseparable they said we were,
For I never left his side.
Nominated for *Cutest Couple*
I was his, and he was mine.

Finally school was over,
and I could see him every day.
And I did until that fateful night,
Now things will never be the same.

Boiling days and sticky nights,
Simply drifted by my mind,
Nothing seemed to matter,
Without him by my side.

School began up again,
but I simply didn't care.
I didn`t do any of the work,
and half the time I wasn't there.

So I guess you probably want to know;
How all this has to do with one night?
Let`s just say it started out with a kiss.
And ended with a blatant lie.

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What do /you/ think happened?
Tell me in your comment. =]

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  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Boiling days and sticky nights,
    Simply drifted by my mind,

    Great imagery. The flow was well done and the message was solid.

    We can all pretty much guess what happened. It started with a kiss...

    Good job
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. that was pretty cool.
    At first I thought he died.

    hm.

    And why December's night. I thought this took place in the summer and septemberish. And the fateful night was in the summer.....

    good poem though, i enjoy reading your work

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this, I thought it was a beautiful read, even though it was so sad.
    I think that it started out really well but things fell apart?

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Nice poem, and you truly made me think.
    I can think of three things.

    1, you got pregnent that nite.
    2, he raped you that night
    or
    3, you fall in love that night.

    please let me know if any of them are correct.
    BTW a 5/5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow.
    I loved how you ended it. You sort of left the reader hanging, amazing! =] Great flow and vocabulary. Though I have to say that I really have no clue what so ever what happened that made it such a bad night. Please do tell! =] 5/5 Great job!

    Stephanie

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