How does it feel?

by Sweet lig   Dec 8, 2006


How does it feel to be broken?
To know that nobody is around to comfort you,
And to know that no one take your hand
And to tell you that theres more better days

How does it feel being so lost?
To know that someone out there,
And your guardian angel
Abandon you the time you needed most

How does it feel to cry?
Knowing that no one wipe your tears,
And that is only because of someone who lied with you.
And your heart feeling so down

How does it feel to be completely alone?
Knowing that your friends
Can help u but they stabbed you at your back
And to fulfilled only their own needs

How does it feel to get hurt?
Every time and every single day,
To always look back and say...
Why I made it all this way?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww so sad, It's like life can be, and I think this poem really got lot readers thinking about those kind of moments, days and friends. Nicely flowed, touching.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Okay it was really good but there were a lot of grammatical errors I seen. But you'll improve so no worries =] 4/5 Kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    This piece was written very nicely I thought. Held a lot of emotion which almost everyone feels. I thought it was a very good write. 5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can deeply relate to this poem. I completely understand the emotions that you portrayed here, whole poem contains sadness which is very heartfelt.
    My favorite stanza is:
    How does it feel to be completely alone?
    Knowing that your friends
    Can help u but they stabbed you at your back
    And to fulfilled only their own needs
    ^
    this is sad, but s true...

    -

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Again with the cliche. I understand poems are to write your feelings, but never fret; you can do this in a non-cliche way. Try finding different ways to express cliche "crimson tears" and "porcelain face" ect.

    Sorry, again. I just didn't feel it.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

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