These Visions

by End Of Eternity   Dec 8, 2006


Different night but same dreams
First i choke but then i scream
My bed shakes everytime in fright
Right in the middle of a lonely night

New sparkling stars with same scar
Crimson flood in crowded bazaar
Tears of children used as light
In the middle of a lonely night

Yet another hope but same old end
Jabbed in back again by so called friend
Will i capitulate or will i ever fight?
These visions in the middle of a lonely night

Burning theatre with my reflection inside
Serpents fall like rain wherever i try to hide
Buried alive with wide open eyes
Happens all the time in my lonely nights

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  • 19 years ago

    by Nee

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  • 19 years ago

    by Chloe

    Love it. every line rhymes but it manages not to overload with rhyme ;) well dun! xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Sourav

    Such a interesting poem. Great flow and wonderfully written!

  • 19 years ago

    by Cindy

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  • 19 years ago

    by ABHISHEK SINHA

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