She commited suicide, but lives on in my heart...

by PoetryHeart   Dec 17, 2006


She was my best friend
so great, so true
but fell into depression
and i didn't know what to do

for weeks and weeks
she lived on without a life
then one day without warning
she made a decision and grabbed a knife

she was only 12 and to young to die
i really miss her so
she was a great friend
oh why, why did she have to go?

i knew her for 10 years,
and i hate that dreaded day
when she took the knife to her throat
oh why didn't she stay?

i miss you a lot
i miss you still
i will miss you know
and i always will.
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when i wrote this, i was thinking about my best friend and me. i wrote it as her telling the story about me, because lately i am so depressed and i have actually thought about suicide. hope you like it!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I really loved this poem, i hope u feel better soon but this was such an emotional amazing poem. thanks so much for the comments uve made n i wud really appreciate it if u did mention me, of course i dont mind, thanks so much!! xx

  • Hey! beautiful poem!!!! Awsome rhyming!!!! Your so talented!

    Thanks very much for your beautiful comment! it really means alot to me!
    If you ever fell sad, n down, or just want to talk, message me, k?
    Love Mel

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    ANYTIME

  • 17 years ago

    by JacKnife Jessica

    Thanx 4 the comment

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Thanks. your poems are way better though

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