Fatherless Christmas

by BeautifulxMess   Dec 18, 2006


It seems like it was only yesterday
when you were here every morning.
Video tapped me unwrapping gifts
that Santa left underneath the tree.

Looking back it was all just a blur;
a memory in the back of my head.
It seemed like you weren't happy
or aroused by my childish smile.

Christmas isn't like it use to be
or how it was way back long ago.
Everybody split apart and went away
or just disappeared out of sight.

Left without a father to share
the joy of Christmas morning.
You forsaken the meaning of
what this holiday is all about.

Dad please understand this
you're not the only bewildered one.
Christmas can't be like it was
because you've casted it aside.

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  • 17 years ago

    by me

    Dis poem wuz real good well i like it..keep it up nd u had a powerful emotion in dis poem since u say ur christmas aint da way it wuz b4...great poem again 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by FallingAngel

    Hey awesome poem,It was greatly written and it sounds like you put a lot of feeling into it. I could actually picture it. 5/5 Excellent poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was really sad..
    I can relate to this one.
    I think you did a great job on this, the words were filled with so much emotion and the imagery, again, was fantastic.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very sad poem. I can feel your pain in every word you have written. It is so sad how one person not in our lives can hurt so bad. Excellent job

  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    I have tried to make a poem about memory it never turned out good as this, good job!

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