One To Blame

by BeautifulxMess   Dec 18, 2006


It's hard to keep moving on to you.
I know you don't understand why.
You can't keep reaching out for me.
You also can't let my dreams die.

When I was young and naive.
I didn't really care about the world.
Now, I see myself battling life.
Times I miss being your little girl.

My little sister has taken my place.
It seems like I'm despised to all.
I hate being disregarded to you.
Mainly, I always hate when I fall.

I can blame you for all this pain.
In the end, it's just going to tire.
It doesn't matter what was done.
All the ashes have bared in the fire.

Father from the flesh of my blood.
The one that left me to weep.
You're the one that haunts my past.
You're the reason I can't sleep.

You're the one to blame of fears.
The one that broken my wings.
For you, Father, to sink in my words
For you, one to blame, of everything.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, I thought it was a very moving piece, really sad but a pleasure to read.
    My favourite part was the last stanza I thought that was really powerful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    "Father from the flesh of my blood.
    The one that left me to weep.
    You're the one that haunts my past.
    You're the reason I can't sleep."

    I love that part and the very last. Wow, This one is really good too. I have to read more of your poetry!!! Good job and keep on writing!! 5/5

    ~Shae

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    So sad. Can't say I love upset family poems, but you did a very good job in your writing. You always do. Your a poet I love to come across because you have great style and rhyme! Love it!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    A very touching write and I get a gray feeling of a mystery here. Nicely done
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Keath

    Jeej, nice job! I like the story behind your poem. You did great with the rhyme, descriptions and stanza’s, but try to focus on a steady rhythm. I know it’s hard but a good rhythm could make your poem even stronger! 4/5

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