Death Beat This Lil Girl

There was a little girl,
Whose mind was just a whirl.
She didn't know what to do,
For she hated herself too.

Her parents never loved her,
Their precious little daughter.
They wanted her to die,
So the little girl said goodbye.

She scrapped for food each day,
Was this the price she had to pay.
Was she such an awful daughter,
She drowned herself in her tears of water.

She grew up, depression began,
She did everything that she can.
To avoid her fate,
To wards the heavenly gate.

But that fateful day finally came,
And within herself she felt the blame.
All that had happened was her fault,
Were thoughts as she cocked the onlooking colt.

She made her final wish,
Let mum and dad rot in piss.
Then she pulled the trigger,
And became a motionless figure.

This little girl could have been saved,
If a friendship had of been made.
Someone who would be there when help was needed,
But instead death won and the little girl was defeated.

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