Through the Sand Storm

by xPerfect Chaosx   Dec 28, 2006


All I can see is the swirling sand
Killing all my senses
Blinding me
Deafening me
Unable to smell
Unable to feel
All I can taste is the hot dead sand
No more
I lay down
My eyes free of tears
The sand swirling around me
I realize,
No one is coming to save me
You're not there
Gone, leaving my emotions
Scattered in the storm
No more
I lay down
Put my head on my hands
And I can take no more
No more disappointment
No more hurt
No more games
My heart can take no more
The sand is blinding,
And it fills the long forgotten corners
Of my mind
Numbing the pain
Numbing the injustice
Numbing you
I can't take it anymore
All I can see is the sand
And in the sand
Your face, swirling by
Not really there
But I can see it
It is the only thing that keeps me moving
Keeps me from laying down
And giving up
But every time I go to touch it
It's gone
I am finally through chasing dreams
And things that will never happen
So here I lay
In the sand
And I give up
Because I am through chasing you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Someones Sanity

    Its awesome I love this you portray the character very well.

    //Khrystyne\\

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Maybe in your next poem add a few more words to each line. this will help. just a few. but still don't get me wrong. this was excellent.

    5/5 forever. David

  • Oh jeeze Danieru. One of your best ever!!! I love it so much!! *hugs you* So E-mail me already!!!

    Mucho Love,
    *~Always Here no matter what~A* (Aka...Kaito Kat!!)

  • 17 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    I could definitely relate to this!! and i love it!! it shows great emotion + a ton of talent! awesome poem!! keep it up =]]. _Mya_

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Lovely! I loved it!
    xoxo