Everlasting ends

by arietty   Dec 28, 2006


You lit up my heart, my mind and my soul
You picked up the pieces that all others stole

You told me our bond would never bend
You told me that we would fight till the end

How naive I was to believe your lies
This was to be my tragic demise

For you left me all hopeless and torn
Left with the pieces, dead and forlorn

Thanks to you I don't sleep at night
Thanks to you I gave up the fight

I hope you're happy I hope you know
But you will never see me, no

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Easy to relate to.
    I have been back stabbed a lot when it comes to friends and left for others in my life. So I can really relate to this one. I could really feel your feelings pouring through every word and you did a wonderful job expressing how you feel. Great job hun! 5/5

    Stay strong!!
    Stephanie.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow! You know, you are so talented!
    I love the style you use, the deep emotional words that you use, you are an awesome poet.
    Don't give up, keep on fighting until the end.
    Keep writing
    love Tara-Kay

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