My Dreams

by Mommy And Me   Dec 29, 2006


My Dreams

Another night staring upon this hollow screen
Watching my hands, as they press against sorrow
Magic pours from my bleeding soul
As I paint this picture in black and white

Slowly the screen fills with letters
As my mind ponders with in life
Tracing the outline of my heart
Here the thoughts are laid out right

Another piece of my soul is shown
As I speak of what I do not understand
My mind, my heart, my soul.
Oh how some times I wish I could just scream

Another night in front of this hollow screen
Typing the words that can not leave my lips
Pouring through my finger tips
Is the story of my dreams

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  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment for contest:

    Great job! This is a unique poem which I love and the imagry is just great. I love the reference to the screen. Keep it up! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is beautiful. Well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    This poem was good, this was a GOOD use of repetitiveness for you only repeated your main thoughts in the first and last stanza. That was good for emphasis. Nice.
    Charisma*