by Elynnka Jan 1, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
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In the garden of diamond roses and emerald leaves |
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Wow. This was really really good! Excellent vocabulary.. Amazing imagery. I loved the repitition of the beginning & last stanza. It really made them stand out! It flowed really well. And was very sad. Kept my attention all the way through. |
by Mistress
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Oh I so enjoyed reading this! Beautifully written. |
by Jade
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I loved reading it! It was so descriptive! Made me feel like i was there myself! fantastic! xx |