Driving away

by Landi Cordier   Jan 3, 2007


Driving away in the cold of night
Wishing that we never had that fight

Driving away from your pitch black heart
Hoping that we never stay this far apart

Driving away from my stone cold fate
Declaring to everyone it's me that they hate

Driving away I know I'll survive
Even if it feels that from a cliff I must dive

Driving away from all that I know
Knowing that as a person I'll finally grow

Driving away, into the sunset
Now there is nothing left for me to regret

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is well written, the rhyme flows smoothly. The repition of 'Driving away..' adds continuity and rhythmn, not to mention the emotional emphasis. I like how you start with despair but end with hope and acceptance. Excellent piece in every way!

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    GaryJ

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a very good poem. I like the way you have captured the feeling of moving on with your life.
    Driving away from all that I know
    Knowing that as a person I'll finally grow. This sums it up greatly!

  • 17 years ago

    by cupidsxvictim

    This poem is incredible.. keep up the good work :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I really liked this poem. your rhyming scheme flowed very well with the words, and i had a tune in my head while i was reading it. wonderful! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Great job.. short and simple.. but still really lets the reader know what your feeling inside..

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