Always
by BeautifulDisaster Jan 5, 2007
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I promise you now |
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16 years ago
Again you have used repetition in this poem to show the srength of what you mean :D loved it
xxx alex xxx -
17 years ago
5/5 excellent. i really liked it. because of your use of repetition with 'always' it made your poem more sencereand deeper. promising. i dont think the last line really fits in as well because the rest of it usually end in "you" or close to it. but great job i really really liked this one. =]
--linds[x] -
17 years ago
5/5 excellent. i really liked it. because of your use of repetition with 'always' it made your poem more sencereand deeper. promising. i dont think the last line really fits in as well because the rest of it usually end in "you" or close to it. but great job i really really liked this one. =]
--linds[x] -
17 years ago
by David
This is so so so so great. this should have won an award. i loved the ending the most. its how it should be. so much love in this poem!
5 from me. david
