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by BeautifulDisaster Sep 21, 2007
Internet slang /
She walks slowly,
Down the long hallways.
The head phones,
In her ears.
Songs screaming in her ears,
And yet she can still hear them.
Those who stand in the hall,
Whispering as she passes.
Just a few of the words she hears.
As soon as she hears the first word,
Her pace quickens.
And as soon as she passes them,
A silent tear rolls down her cheek.
She wipes the tear,
While slowing her pace.
Just as she's ok,
She hears another whisper.
by Sora Lynn
I really liked this poem!!
it was beautiful in every way.
it showed emotion, and suspense.
and i love the title and the subject, it's something different.
you did a wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5.
I like that it's so simple but has so much depth
the ending just makes you feel the hoplessness
This is good heartbrakes are but they can heel if you find another person
by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
The ending of the poem wasn't good. It left me thinking what was the last whisper. It's good though. 5/5
by Catastrophic Beauty
Nice poem. Liked the structure, it's very unique. I think you need to expand your vocabulary and use more descriptive words though. 4/5
But overall, this poem flowed very nicely and was well put together.