Loveless (tyburn)

by Anonymous Angel   Jan 6, 2007


Fearless,
scar-less,
darkness,
loveless,
The girl had a fearless, scar-less mind,
Lived in darkness, loveless by mankind.

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its a tyburn (A six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables)

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, truly powerful. i know from personal experience that this form is very hard to write. Well done, truly captivating piece, I like it a lot.
    Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    A very odd style I must admit but I think you made the best out of it and did a good job inventing words without seeming silly or vapid. Another wonderful piece! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I really liked this one. Overall it was well written and quite unique. I must try this style now lol. A beautiful write. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Cool I just got done writing a tyburn poem. Your's is great. The flow was very good and I liked the topic. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Excellent piece of a Tyburn poetry it is. I have, yet, to successfully finish one piece of it, though.

    This piece was rather written well. For something short, it has already encompassed so much meaning. I liked it. =] Nice shot.

    All the best and take care.