It just went wrong

by Jenny   Jan 9, 2007


Weakened by emotion,
Driven by thoughts
I have to get away from the commotion
while my stomach is in knots.
There has to be another way out,
but sadly there is no other in sight.
I have to deal with the pain that comes about
because it would be senseless to stay around to fight.
Enough is enough.
Nothing left to be said.
When the going got rough
The tough ended up dead.
The bubble was about to burst
It just went on too long
Trying to forgive the worst,
but it was just a friendship gone wrong.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow this is excellent!
    Great JOB!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Boy, Can I relate to this.
    I loved this, the wording was fantastic, and I enjoyed the flow.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    How very sad. You have done a very good job writing this. The enotion can be felt by the reader. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Emily

    This poem is really meaningful! xo. it good tho cuz thats wat poems are.. ur a really good writer