Comments : Footprints

  • 12 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a really good poem brit, (only my opinion) but the 4th line could go
    "Always and forever, we will be." but thats just my opinion, but this is beautiful, i give it a 5/5!!!! keep it up!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This is a wonderful poem, it's really sweet!!i like the first line of all of them, how u changed it, but u kept it the same at the same time (i know what im trying to say...). it's really nice that you could write that, i'm glad that you found someone! great poem! 5/5!!!

    *Shawte*

  • 12 years ago

    by LuvLyLynn

    WOW!!! I love this poem a lot its sweet... You should write more poems like these it's a good change... :) I like the flow and how everything fits together well... You are talented poet... I say 5/5...

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Awe, how sweet. A life of love, I like it! Very nice job!

  • This poem is very good. I liked the way the worded everything. Good job. 5/5. Please comment on mine if you can. Great poem.
    Crystal

  • 12 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Wow, that is so danm beautiful! lol! amazing work, your rhyming is perfect and not at all cliche! great work!
    Love Steph!

  • 12 years ago

    by Laura

    That was a beautifully penned piece. The flow was great and undisturbed. The rhymes had equal syllables and were easy to read, none seemed forced. Your adoration for this person is quite clear and expressed wonderfully.

  • 12 years ago

    by x in love x

    Excellent 11/10

  • 12 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    We leave with footprints in the skys
    is a fantastic bit of imagery, love the ending very much! good work!

  • 12 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Beautiful poem, very relaxing. For some reason, any poem at involves footprints, catches my attention. Very enchanting ending. Keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Oh my Britt, this was beautiful, it blew me away. I loved the detail and the way you used the footprints to represent love, and life. I really like the end, the part about footprints in the sky, it was so well worded and..beautiful. Great work Darling.

    --Steph

    Oh by the way I noticed a typo:

    "We're though this life, won the race."
    Shouldnt that be "through"?

  • 12 years ago

    by Rocky

    I liked this poem. it had a regular rhyme scheme and read quite well.
    it was well thought out with the 4 stanzas showing the progress of your love. and it is a deeper poem than it at first appears. i liked the last stanza how when you die you will still leave traces of your love in the "sky". though the second line of the second stanza doesn't quite fit in properly to me. but that may just be me. good work

    Rocky

  • 12 years ago

    by Leanne

    Awww such a sweet poem, great rhyming and flow and the imageary was great too. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Delie

    OOHHHHN! I really love this poem

  • 12 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww... i absolutely love this poem!! its soo sweet.. and its written very nicely .. the imagery and rhyme was perfect.. the flow was good.. spectacular write!

  • 12 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a lovely poem. The last stanza really touched me.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    Oh wow. this was just beautiful. everything flowed so wonderfully and the rhyme scheme was lovely. an excellent write! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by lala

    Yet again, great work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I've already commented on this poem, but i want to once more just to tell you that this is one of the sweetest poems i have read in this category. beautiful imagery and lovely choice of words [:

  • 12 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    This is such a sweet poem i love it!! it made me smile!! all ur poems are excellent!!
    5/5
    Luv FallenxFromxGrace