This is a wonderful poem, it's really sweet!!i like the first line of all of them, how u changed it, but u kept it the same at the same time (i know what im trying to say...). it's really nice that you could write that, i'm glad that you found someone! great poem! 5/5!!!
WOW!!! I love this poem a lot its sweet... You should write more poems like these it's a good change... :) I like the flow and how everything fits together well... You are talented poet... I say 5/5...
That was a beautifully penned piece. The flow was great and undisturbed. The rhymes had equal syllables and were easy to read, none seemed forced. Your adoration for this person is quite clear and expressed wonderfully.
Oh my Britt, this was beautiful, it blew me away. I loved the detail and the way you used the footprints to represent love, and life. I really like the end, the part about footprints in the sky, it was so well worded and..beautiful. Great work Darling.
Oh by the way I noticed a typo:
"We're though this life, won the race."
Shouldnt that be "through"?
I liked this poem. it had a regular rhyme scheme and read quite well.
it was well thought out with the 4 stanzas showing the progress of your love. and it is a deeper poem than it at first appears. i liked the last stanza how when you die you will still leave traces of your love in the "sky". though the second line of the second stanza doesn't quite fit in properly to me. but that may just be me. good work