by BrixGoesxRawr Jan 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Eyes desiccated from crying abounding, unsaltened tears. |
by donna
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An excellent usage of words. You did a great job on this poem, it was very sad but had a nice ending. |
by Darien
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Breezy.. it seems like someone out there doesnt like you very much. You are a talented poet, and these poems are definitely worth something. Keep on writing! Don't let anyone stop you! |
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Everybody has bad days, but in a relationship you have to get passed the hard times to enjoy the good ones, amazing poem 5/5 hope your days get better |