Rainbow [Pleiades]

by Tammie   Jan 13, 2007


Rainbows shine bright through clouds,
Rain passing slow with time
Revealing lustrous shades
Radiating beauty
Right across the sky, with
Remote endings not seen,
Raising eyebrows in awe.

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Pleiades -
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  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    Amazing poem hun... Beautifully written and a great usage of words also... You always make these 'styled' poems look so easy... Well done 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Beautiful poem, you did a wonderful job making everything flow one line after another. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done, a very hard structure that i have not mastered.
    But you did this very well,
    great imagery, well done
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is really good and you stuck to the structure but kept the poem imaginitive. you use great imagery.

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    This is very very imaginative. the words you use beautifully describe rainbows. perfect.

    voted 5/5. great work!

    david

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