Let Me Breathe

by Sarah Ann   Jan 14, 2007


((Okay, this may not sound too nice when read, but it is actually a song I wrote today. Even played some soft music for it. LOL! There's a first time for everything horrific.))

And I'm falling in
I don't want to feel this lonely anymore,
But you won't give in,
And now I wonder
Why am I still standing at your door?

Please, go. Because I do not have the strength to leave myself,
And I know...
This may be hard on me,
But now I fell,
And it's too late for excuses,
I'm tired of feeling useless,
I wish right now you would just leave...
Please, baby let me breathe.

And life is harder everyday
When you're carrying this burden all alone
I want to confide in you, I do,
And when I call you're always home

But how is it I would open up?
My problems,
They all go back to you
I had the courage to speak up
But it's been getting hard to do

And everything just starts to fade...
In cold blood, I walk away.
Because...
It took you time to leave,
And you never let me
Breathe.

Pain was inflicted, I was crying
Now I gave up, no more trying.
You've made me hurt,
Left me alone.
And now, I don't know where to go.

((Perhaps it was weird at the end...expecting a happier scene because she'd left; but that's the beauty of irony.)) - Sorry if it was horrible. It sounds better sung.

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  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    I enjoyed this I attemped to sing it. It was great.

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Actaul;y this sounds perfect, i really enjoyed it you ARE very talented. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK. one of my favs by you...

  • 17 years ago

    by Kylie

    I don't think this poem sounds mean at all, infact I know exactly how you feel. I really liked this one, great work!

    x.xBrokenx.x

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    I think that it's beautiful either way! Great Job!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    What are you talking about "horrible"!?!
    ___

    "Please, go. Because I do not have the strength to leave myself,
    And I know...
    This may be hard on me,
    But now I fell,
    And it's too late for excuses,
    I'm tired of feeling useless,
    I wish right now you would just leave...
    Please, baby let me breathe".
    ___

    Loved that stanza. Especially the first line. I can relate to it so much!!! FSDFDS:F. I dunno what else to say. Lol. This was brilliant! 5/5 Take care!

    Love ya,

    -` Liz