Missing you

by Leanne   Jan 16, 2007


If I could turn back time
I would go back to that day
The one when you left me
Wouldn't let me have my say

I tried to say I was sorry
That it never meant a thing
Everybody makes mistakes
It was just a meaningless fling

I know I really hurt you
I messed up and broke our trust
Endless nights of crying
Due to me giving in to lust

You didn't want to listen
Couldn't even look me in the eye
Who could have ever known
That day you was about to die

Outside the rain was pouring
I begged you not to go
You refused to listen to reason
How I wish you had gone slow

Paramedics made that dreadful call
Hearing the news my stomach churned
The road had been too slippy
Your car had overturned

My body felt numb
Not believing what I'd heard
I raced to the hospital
This truly was absurd

But seeing what I saw
As I arrived by you're bed
Made my heart scream out with pain
My baby really was dead

Now one year on the pain still strong
Everyday I'm feeling blue
If your looking down on me
You'll know I'm missing you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by amelia

    Hi this is an amazing poem
    feel a strong rush of emotions outta this one
    5/5
    love
    amy
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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    So far all of your poems have left me thinking, "wow." you are truly a great poet & you use your ability to write very well. you're great at telling a story through poetry. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by lashes

    Hey Leanne, a heartfelt poem you have written and its very well written to in my opinion, your ryming isn't to forced and the rhythem is good,only thing i dont really like about it is it's legnth i think that if its a personal poem it should be as succinct as possible so you don't give the impression you'r being melor dramatic ,but this is my opinion and it ihas not effected my vote.

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow..

    ''If your looking down on me
    You'll know I'm missing you. ''

    ^ those lines.. were just, an amazingly perfect ending.. They really got me. The first half.. i can deffinitley relate to. It brought tears to my eyes, the imagery was so intense. And the wording was good. Flowed well too. But realy really sad. =[ Ahh. I loved it! Great job. Keep it up

    Bri.x

  • 17 years ago

    by angelina

    Really really good ... i felt the emotion .. almost brought me to tears

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