I'll get over you

That poem hit home about how I was feeling. Someone I really love is going through that. She was so blind behind him and now its over but she can never just forget him because she got pregnant and had his child.

Aww. This was sad. =[ But really really good. It flowed well, and the wording was good.

One thing though:

Slowly I began to realise
Everything you said was untrue
Gradually my heart will mend
I know that I'll get over you.

^ That was one of my favorite stanzas.. it had a great impact. But, I think 'realise' should be 'realize'

Also.. Another stanza I really love:

Day by day our love grew
The stars sparkled in your eyes
If I knew then what I know now
I'd never be taken in by your lies

^ I really loved that. Specially the last two lines of it.. Wow.. just amazing. Great job. Keep it up, Hun.

Bri.x

Aww this one is good too ... i feel emotion in all your poems and i can relate ... prbly cause guys ... people who hurt you are all the same and somehow kill us inside

I love this poem and i feel that i can relate.... i like the way you worded it ..

"With you I felt whole"

WOW!!! this is honestly my favorite poem that i've ever read ever ever ever!!! GREAT job and i'm definitely adding you to my favorites.