I'm Sorry

There is so much sincerity in this poem. I was just wondering if you sent it to them and if it had a positive impact??

A good write with good flow and rhyme.

Michael

I chose this one at random out of your vast collection. Is there another you would like me to comment on? I will be home this evening and so back on line!

Another amazing poem.
I love your writing, hun.

'But surely this isn't fair
To keep me blue for so long?'

I don't like the word 'blue' I thnk you should have found a different word to fit in there.. It's one of those short words, that don't really fit with the rest of the poem.. I do that a lot, eh.
I think it could just sound a bit better if changed.

Other than that, you did an amazing job.
I think I'll add you to my favorites. :]

Very brave to admit that you were in the wrong and that you are missing them so much, reminds me of some of my past experiences with friends. Nicely written, the flow of the poem was very nice and kept throughout, good job. 5/5

Sincere and sweet! I also hope my best friend will eventually forgive me. It's been so painful and lonely since we parted! 5/5

Omg that was great keep it up.